Dysfunction: Dissolution

06/14/2005

In a delicate balance nothing is certain, it's in that certainty that some find despair and others find hope.

I think you need to change that to...

in a delicate balance nothing is certain and when balanced upon that fulcrum of uncertainty some find despair and others find hope.

I'd also change one of the "find"s to discover

or maybe change it to:

there is nothing delicate or balanced about the hope one has as the other despairs ...in a sling.

Im sorry, that was wrong. My bad.

I like that. And I'd also like to retract my earlier edit. I miss understood the line.

Just change the second certainty to fact.

Ok I'm finished with being an ass... I still get tofo, right?

yeah, on your face.

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